Read my new book, Plotting Your Fantasy Novel: https://jedherne.com/plotting-book-resource
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction
00:30 - Starting too big
06:34 - Not giving a complete unit of story
11:47 - Failing to establish voice/tone
16:27 - Too predictable
19:32 - No momentum
✏️ JOIN MY FANTASY WRITERS' GUILD
Join my accountability and support community for fantasy writers: https://jedherne.com/guild
📙 MY BOOKS:
Across the Broken Stars: https://jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstars
The Thunder Heist: https://jedherne.com/thethunderheist/
Fires of the Dead: https://jedherne.com/firesofthedead
Kingdom of Dragons: https://amzn.to/3JbLdSv
🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:
Siege of Treboulain: https://www.choiceofgames.com/siege-of-treboulain/
