Magnet full PV [WIP]

SUMIMASEN I'M AMERICAN so sorry if my translations are wrong or if anything in the video is inaccurate. also means this is not a reprint kthx i've been drawing this shit for like 5 days straight ughh probably not gonna touch it again for a while :c WIP FOREVER. or at least until i figure out a better way to do this shit orz uhh here's the original magnet PV: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm6909505 and here's choucho's version which i believe is nicer (lol i love choucho srs :'D): http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm7145886 and here are the original translations which i mixed because i can (orz): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egxSBhfjcTU http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xKTSc1NC84Q uhh what else. i think that's it. yeaaahhh. orz i've never done this before i hope i'm doing it right. D': /edit mp3 download of choucho's version here: http://nicosound.anyap.info/sound/sm7145886 パソコンへ転送 = download link c: OR I've uploaded it here as well: http://www.mediafire.com/?yozzjmgkiib