Panoptic I - DaJaRi

a piece of a quite large poem I wrote a long while back, it's about a lot of things n rich in symbolism n such I kinda just poured a bunch of large words that are fun to say or hear said togather and it was another of those ones where I wrote it then was kinda like where did this come from lol. the piece of poetry is quite large so I'm gonna be breaking it up into pieces n making several versions of varying lengths this one and "I see ( said she ) " are the first pieces of it this one being the very start n I felt like it goes along even if I think it cut off abruptly (which it kinda did there were a couple other lines but seems suno gets weird about talking about some things lol 😅 but this part is nice as it is as I've found it mostly to be about integration which are a lot of the things I've posted this far as always there's layer of meaning to whomsoever can hear them but in general it's about integration of the shadow and some as above so below n like all my writings of this style there's spiritual and esoteric significance as well. it's also generally about creativity and capturing the thoughts to create with and fighting the disparaging thoughts that hold one back and fighting thru the negativity and doing stuff anyway idk there's a lot in it lol each like could be about a different thing that's why I like it bc every time I read it or now listen to it I catch a different part like it grows on me n I wrote it lol how about YOU tell ME what it's about actually bc I'd be very interested in hearing anyone else telling me what they get from it or what it means to them or what parts caught your ear or resonated with you. Fr tho I'd love to hear any and all feedback even if it's just this doesn't make sense lol but yeah hope you enjoy come back for more version or expansion of the poem I've got like 5x this to get into song format in just this poem alone also if ya kinda dig it or want the extension going into the more spiritual aspect of it and into the kinda dual nature of self look up the "I see ( said she ) " version that one gets into some deep esoteric stuff that I doubt I'll find many capable of understanding what I'm saying that are also interested in listening to such music lol 😂 but ya never know