I recorded 6 takes this AM back to back and spliced this track out of 2 of them with 3 edits. The first half is still a little forced and I'm not really comfortable but the 2nd half does come alive - I think of that kind of energy as taking off, leaving the ground, strength, speed, flying.
Audio only https://audio.com/phil-maynard/audio/2026-05-09-phil-take3-5-edit3