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Why Your Script Feels Flat | Vlog 3

May 16, 2026
3:57

Today’s writing session completely changed my movie. At first, everything felt flat and honestly kind of boring. The scenes technically worked, but there was no energy underneath them. Then I realized the problem: I didn’t fully know what my character specifically wanted in the scene. Once I found that intention — and connected it to the larger emotional goal of the movie — the entire scene changed. The dialogue got sharper, the conflict became clearer, and suddenly the movie felt alive again. In this vlog I talk about: why scenes feel “dead” or flat, how character intention creates tension, and how discovering a new angle for my film changed the writing process today. If you’re writing a screenplay, this might help you diagnose why certain scenes aren’t working. #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingvlog #screenwriter #storytelling

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